Working an a Fable FanFic

[BWfreak]

I have been working on a FanFic that takes place after the events of Fable 3. It can be found here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7437576/1/bFable_b_bIIII_b_Return_of_the_Crawler

It is my first story so please go easy on me. I know it isn't a masterpiece. But I would love to hear what you guys think!

 

[UnholyKing]

i like it but it could be better but keep it up

 

[BWfreak]

Yea. I have all these great ideas in my head but when I go to actually put it on the page it comes out slightly off every time lol. Thanks for the feedback by the way, it's the first opinion I've had of my writing from someone I don't actually know. The only feedback I've had is from friends who probably don't wanna tell me my writing sux haha

 

[UnholyKing]

no worry i used 2 do what you do aswell but now i forgot how to do a story when the next bit coming up

 

[r5v3n]

Namarie, melon- Hail, friend. Quite nice that story was. Though I disagree a bit with your Crawler origin bit. Here's my idea: the Crawler didn't send the Court to Albion; it is the other way around:
"After the Archon (by then still called William Black) defeated the Queen of Blades, her body fell on the earth, making it barren and devoid of life (thus the desert) from her blood sprang a being who hid in only the darkest of chambers (the place where the Court deals Judgement) and who plotted the destruction of the Kingdom. However, it was delayed for ages unknown by a spell of the Archon (the 'luminous spirits of the sands'). One wizard, however, recorded what happened. This wizard later became known as Hallik the Necromancer (see my thread, The Hordes of Hollows) and he made a record of the spell the Archon used and (later, when he was corrupted by the Sword of Aeons) the counterspell to use for its diffusal. Centuries later, this knowledge will be used to unseal the terrible plague of darkness."
Made it up, myself, for my fanfic (and, hopefully, a book): The Hordes of Hollows.

 

[BWfreak]

Namarie, melon- Hail, friend. Quite nice that story was. Though I disagree a bit with your Crawler origin bit. Here's my idea: the Crawler didn't send the Court to Albion; it is the other way around:
"After the Archon (by then still called William Black) defeated the Queen of Blades, her body fell on the earth, making it barren and devoid of life (thus the desert) from her blood sprang a being who hid in only the darkest of chambers (the place where the Court deals Judgement) and who plotted the destruction of the Kingdom. However, it was delayed for ages unknown by a spell of the Archon (the 'luminous spirits of the sands'). One wizard, however, recorded what happened. This wizard later became known as Hallik the Necromancer (see my thread, The Hordes of Hollows) and he made a record of the spell the Archon used and (later, when he was corrupted by the Sword of Aeons) the counterspell to use for its diffusal. Centuries later, this knowledge will be used to unseal the terrible plague of darkness."
Made it up, myself, for my fanfic (and, hopefully, a book): The Hordes of Hollows.

Awesome story! When you do write it let me know. It sounds really interesting and I wanna read it

 

[r5v3n]

Thanks! It is so heartwarming to see good people in this site. Frankly, this is better than Facebook.

 

[BWfreak]

It is! I looked for a Fable group on Facebook and found only one and no one ever posts or responds to posts. So I finally gave up and googled "Fable forums" and found this site lol

 

[r5v3n]

Seconded.

 

[UnholyKing]

i 3rd this froms is the best

 

[BWfreak]

People are a lot more talkative here on the forums.

Wanted to let you guys know I just started work on the next chapter so it will be posted soon. Also, here is an updated link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7437576/1/bFable_b_bIV_b_Return_of_the_Crawler

 

[r5v3n]

Just what I wanted! You know, you've got a very exciting style in writing those stories of yours...!

 

[BWfreak]

lol thnx still a bit left of this chapter before i post though it will hopefully be up by tomorrow night

 

[BWfreak]

The latest chapter of my story has been posted! Please tell me what you think
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7437576/1/bFable_b_bIV_b_Return_of_the_Crawler

 

[ParamoreBabe]

This is very good! The only thing I thought was kinda wierd was the way that the chapters were split up in the begining, but overall, it looks very good! Keep it up!

 

[BWfreak]

Thanks I am still working on the final battle. I'm kinda stuck, but i'll get it haha